Suz Ex Machina
1 min readOct 5, 2023

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Tony, you seem very angry, like an attack dog ready to bite. You jumped in this conversation to support another male writer, and I called you out for attacking me because it seemed boorish and childish, like your bro couldn't make his own points to buttress his assertions.

Now, as far as your grammar, the line beginning with the word "nothing" is not a sentence because it fails to have subject-verb agreement. Kudos for actually knowing that the word English is capitalized, but by the same token, the word "mansplaining" should be capitalized, as well, because it begins a new sentence.

And, Tony, if in fact I live in a fantasy world, it is the one where literate people can discuss topics in a relatively civil manner and explore new ideas without being so defensive that they spill their mean-spirited drivel across the internet without editing or self-reflection for everyone to read.

Please don't respond to me without a better reason than simply bashing my comments in a defensive stance that should be beneath you if you are over the age of 10.

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Suz Ex Machina
Suz Ex Machina

Written by Suz Ex Machina

Unflinching protagonist weaving her life into a story

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